I was thrilled with the feedback I received from my impromptu poll. Seventeen people took the time to read both Versions and click on their choice. I even had two people who suggested that Version A and B should be combined!
For those of you who are interested in the actual results, here they are:
Version A won by 6%, which in this small of a sample, is only one person. So, given these results, I will craft a new description of the book that will entice people and tickle their curiosity.
As Ernest Hemingway said, “We are all apprentices in a craft where no one ever becomes a master.” Thank you for helping an apprentice become better.
I am borrowing the Hemingway quote! Good response from your readers.
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